Ocean writing

This week we have been trying to put more descriptive words in our writing. This is my poem about the ocean
I added, what I saw, what I heard.
I tried to add what I felt, what I tasted

watermelon writing

My watermelon

The skin looked hard as a crunchy lollies

Mrs Gomm slices the watermelon open it sounded like a
zipper going up and down.

The sweet delicious tastes of watermelon make want to eat
watermelon all of the time.

I hear the sounds of crunching when I bite into the watermelon.

It tasted like a watery pear that has just fallen of a tree.

santa

Santa

I woke up to a loud noise that was coming from the roof “ouch” he said as he came down the chimney with a loud “bang” he fell to the bottom, his sack dropped on his head with a clang. Santa got back up and put his sack the ground beside the tree. He graded out 5 big presents they couldn't even fit under the tree there was only room for 5 small present so Santa had and idea he graved  4 elves out of the trunk of the sled and they all made the presents fit under the tree.

animation

summer

                                                    I hope u enjoy my summer poem

Harata & barbara Punctuation

smart learners

we are learning to critique blog posts and use voki to create
your own character and give it a voice and we are learning to be smart learners on our divices . I found making my character was a little bit different because you have to look around in the animals section and the other ones to.I found naming my creature and putting a background at the back 

BY Harata

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